Katie
Tyo
Professor
Klepper
English
114B
March
23, 2012
Space
Essay
The space I chose is the mall in the
Santa Clarita Valley. This mall is called the Valencia Town Center. The
Valencia Town Center is roughly six city blocks long. Over the years there have
been additions and upgrades to the Valencia Town Center. With all of these
changes there are a few parts of the Valencia Town Center that do not match the
newer portions of the Valencia Town Center. These differences in the mall could
be changed so that the Valencia Town Center blends together better and looks
better overall. “Spatial enclosure is a balance between opening and closing,
between cosmic infinity and the Platonic prison (A waste of space? Towards a
critique of the social production of space 22). The space within the Valencia Town Center has
been put to good use because of the versatility of everything within the
complex of the Valencia Town Center mall.
The
Valencia Town Center mall has created a space for everyone in the Santa Clarita
Valley. There is going to be something going on at the mall that is of interest
to everybody whether it is the summer time concerts, the fairs that occur there
sometimes or the carnivals that come there during the summer time. There is
going to be something to do for everyone especially during the summer and
winter times. The Valencia Town Center mall is also directly connected with one
of the Santa Clarita Valley’s movie theaters, it is also one of the most
popular and nicest, and it is also connected with the nicest hotel the Santa
Clarita Valley has to offer. The Valencia Town Center mall plays a major role
in the lives of the residents of the Santa Clarita Valley.
The Valencia Town Center mall is
very important to the Santa Clarita Valley. This is where so many of the
restaurants are and where a majority of the shopping is located. This is like
the heart of the Santa Clarita Valley so much goes on here. Since it is so
important to the city to survive it is key in the layout of the city. All the
best shopping seems to be directly related to the mall whether it is inside the
mall or around the mall.
The
additions to the Valencia Town Center have all been extremely nice. From the downtown area that leads from the
mall all the way to the movie theater complex to the most recent additions of
the patio area filled with shops and restaurants. The Valencia Town Center has
a variety of services to provide the community.
Also in the mall complex are some office buildings in use by large
corporations such as Princess Cruises. The space within the Valencia Town
Center has been put to good use.
The Valencia
Town Center mall is the best place to hang-out with friends and just be a
teenager in the Santa Clarita Valley. The mall is crawling with teenagers nearly
all the time. With all the options of food from the food court to the patio dining
options to the restaurants even down by the movie theater there is always
somewhere fun and exciting to eat at which is the perfect atmosphere and excuse
for teenagers to always hang-out at the mall.
Architecturally
the Valencia Town Center mall has a very modern look to it especially the more
recent additions. This gives the whole mall a feel of importance to the Santa
Clarita Valley. The versatility of this mall makes it such a unique place as
well. I have never been to another mall that has office buildings in the mall
so the mall is both modern and versatile.
The space itself is a very functional space.
With the stores and restaurants all mixed in together very efficiently the flow
of the Valencia Town Center is very good. All around the interior of the mall
there are comfortable chairs to relax and hang-out at which is a more modern
twist on malls. There have been new additions open as recent as earlier this
year and there is still work underway to add more to the outdoor patios. The
following building is one of the buildings still underway no one knows yet what
is going to be in this building but what is known is that it is a beautiful
building.
Parts of the
original mall match the new paint scheme more than other parts of the older
mall. There are two stores that come to mind when this is said. The first one
being Macy’s shown here.
The
second building and the building that needs to change the most would be the
Sears building for some reason Sears decided to paint their building the
whitest color they could find. It is so white it almost looks like it is just
the primer coat but it has been this way for almost a year now. The whiteness
of this building does not come even a little close to the color scheme of the
rest of the mall. At least the Macy’s building is a little close to the color
scheme of the rest of the mall, the Sears building just sticks out like a sore
thumb.
The
variety of stores also gives the Valencia Town Center uniqueness. The stores
range from high end to affordable, it has multiple department stores and more. There
is just such a variety of stores it is unbelievable. No matter who you are or
what you like you can find a store that you like somewhere in the Valencia Town
Center mall.
Besides these two buildings that are
unable to blend with the rest of the Valencia Town Center this mall is
extremely nice and well blended. If these two buildings were to be painted
closer colors to the rest of the mall then the mall would be architecturally
perfect in the eyes of the residents of the Santa Clarita Valley. The residents
already adore this complex because it is an escape from the Southern California
extreme weather and a place for people to hang-out with friends while still
getting what they need to get done. It is the best of both worlds for the
residents while looking pretty good at the same time.
Personally all throughout my junior
high school, high school and college years this has been at the epicenter of my
activities with friends. Its location makes it the perfect place to start out a
weekend with my friends. There is always something to do at the Valencia Town
Center mall.
Works
Cited
"JSTOR."
Architecture is Space. N.p., n.d. Web. 23 Mar. 2012.
<www.jstor.org.libproxy.csun.edu/stable/1424783>.
"JSTOR."
The Occupation and Fragmentation of space: Consequences of neighboring roots. N.p., n.d. Web. 23
Mar. 2012. <www.jstor.org.libproxy.csun.edu/stable/2389967>.
"JSTOR."
A waste of space? Towards a critique of the social production of space .
N.p., n.d. Web. 23 Mar. 2012.
<www.jstor.org.libproxy.csun.edu/stable/623315>.
Your introduction seems very general as you keep reading into the essay. Try making it general then moving on to specific things like what are the new things added or the old buildings. For your thesis maybe you could be specific about what needs buildings need to be blended together. Try adding interesting things so that the reader would want to continue reading your essay.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this because I am from Valencia. Your introduction is alright just add more detail and a clear thesis to make it better!
ReplyDeleteI thought your introduction was clear and easy to read. I would just add a little more detail about the place in your thesis statement.
ReplyDeleteEasy to read just fix up the thesis a bit
ReplyDeleteThis was a good start. I think you should make some of your sentences shorter. You just need a more clear thesis but other than that just expand your essay more.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job. The thesis was a little unclear. I would also say that you need to expand your paragraphs a littl bit more. They go by very quick and I would like to more about it.
ReplyDeleteGood essay. I would suggest that you expand your ideas and add sentences. Some parts can seem a little choppy
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